Blog #7

So far my paper is coming along okay. I've found a couple of resources explaining the problems of chat rooms. However, both resources lack many real-life examples of how kids were approached in chat rooms by predators. In addition, I have found a few websites that give various examples in which the problem can be fixed. These will be helpful in backing my suggestions throughout my paper. Also, one of the biggest problems I am having with my paper is length. I think that I need to further explain my ideas and provide more specific examples within my paper. This will probably help to add length. One other issue with my paper is my thesis. I think it may be a little unclear, so I need to work on stating the point of my paper more clearly to make it easier for the reader to understand.